Little Glimpse Of Mother Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Little Glimpse Of Mother



Even though very far
You are my star
I miss
Your gentle kiss

This is what I remember
When you tried to offer
Good food despite my displeasure
You were making it sure

I have no idea about words
How to praise as I consider you lord
You are creator
My lovely mother

Even though I am better placed
I have always raced
To have little glimpse
Of your loving face

I wish to see you in good health
Never in short of money or wealth
I shall work hard and earn
To keep you happy sans concern

I look at the importance of sun
The sea also makes to think of fun
But you are greatest of all
I always miss and wish to make a call

Saturday, October 4, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 October 2014

This might be a perception or a perception error. Thanks for reading my poem, Hi Mom, and realizing the vastness of the mother epic. Uniqueness is your style and maintained well. Mother's theme is infinite and can not be interpreted in poem is true. After reading poem you express your uniqueness is nice effort. It is reflected in Little Glimpse of Mother. Really your effort is appreciable. Thanks for having nice time with mother topic. Sometimes it happens that we understand but in confusion due to perception error.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 October 2014

Thank you very much Sir for replacing and editing this poem. Now it has removed my stanzas and entered your thoughts of stanzas. Now this expresses your own words. I hope you will keep your unique style in future too which should not be exactly copied from other poets. That's hurts creative poets a lot. I was astonished while I read eagerly your new poem but found my poem entirely which I had posted one day before on 3rd October 2014. One day after i.e. on 4th October 2014, just before few minutes under new title I found my poem under Little glimpse of mother of yours. I was shocked and that is why requested to remove stanzas and write of your own stanzas. Thanks a lot at last you kept my request.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 October 2014

How have you expressed my poem with same stanzas under new title? This violates creative laws and seems something different. Every poet should express new lines in their unique ways. Will you kindly write your own thoughts about. I astonished finding my creative lines the entire poem under new title of this poem. All are equal. Mehta Sir will you kindly remove the stanzas and replace your own words which should not be similar to my poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 October 2014

Even though very far You are my star I miss Your gentle kiss

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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