Limerick.49. Change Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.49. Change

Rating: 5.0


In her teens, she had a wasp waist
All her dress would then nicely fit
Now she is all blubber
More like rubber
She has no waist, is a barrel of fat

Monday, August 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am not making fun of anyone in particular! Sadly this is the case with most of us ladies after a certain age!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 02 September 2015

You made me smile, yes, nowadays I don't laugh, I just smile.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2015

Amazing and interesting. Funny and captivating. A best Limerick..........10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 04 September 2015

Good one! Funny too! Enjoyed.

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2015

Ha ha ha...........With age everything grows..........10

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Sanjukta Nag 01 September 2015

a humourous presentation of change that life brings....... enjoyed it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 June 2020

Truly speaking, your these kinds of works always carry a lot of fun with poetic pleasure! Another amazing Limerick dear madam....10++++++++++++

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 January 2019

O, the sad reality of consumerism society! Of course, there are many other factors like: metabolism, lifestyle, genetics, etc. Perceptively done! Wit at its best!

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

nicely captured the progress of shape as one grows older. ! wow!

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Loke Kok Yee 12 October 2015

As long as she have a sweet smile my heart she will still beguile. Lovely limerick Valsa

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Lyn Paul 05 September 2015

Fortunately I still wear the same size, just don't look quite the same. I simply love your humour Valsa. Thank You

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