Life Poem by Nick Jordan.

Life

Rating: 4.8


As a child I dreamt that I was flying,
Invincible, unstoppable and death defying,  
Free as a bird and soaring high,
I watched the world just pass me by,
As I grow old,
I'm far less bold,
In fact I'm exhausted if truth be told,
My body aches and my mind is gone,
The light has faded where it once shone,
But boldly I still soldier on.
As an adult I dream that I am falling,
And I hear my inevitable destiny calling,
For when my world has all gone dark,
I can safely say I left my mark.

Nick Jordan

7/1/13 

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 December 2015

As a child I dreamt that I was flying, Invincible, unstoppable and death defying, Free as a bird and soaring high, I watched the world just pass me by, i can safely i say i left my mark. wonderful ending of the poem with lot of fulfillment and hope. thank you. tony

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Joshua Fegley 07 January 2013

This site sucks sometimes with these comments. Anyway. Good poem Nick.

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Joshua Fegley 07 January 2013

I like it Nick. Truly a realistic poem on life.

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Nicholas Rahming 07 January 2013

I love it. Almost like my poem ' My own way. Please feel free to read it along with my other poems for my future books.

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