Let's Make A New World..... Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Let's Make A New World.....

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Let's make a new world Of hope and joy
Where truth and honesty
Will prevail
In all the forms,
Where desires will not die
An untimely death,
Where poverty and oppression
Will not be obstacles In progress,
Where mind and heart
Will be free
From narrowness,
Where tiny voices will have
An easy access
To mighty ears,
Where power will be
A source of sympathy,
Where humanity will take
Precedence over wealth.
Let's make such a world..
Let's make such a world..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Ayala 18 July 2011

thanks so much for commenting on my poem, and thanks for your request on seeing one of your poems (A busy street) . I'm not good with abstracts poems, I did understand this one. Just want to say very well done, it reminds me of what the Bible speaks about of a new world to come. And yes in this world it is possible to live by most of these conditions even now, maybe not the Whole world but people worldwide are doing so, they already conquered hatred between nationality's, race, etc. No longer desires to steal, lie, cheat or kill. We call each other Brothers and sisters, world wide we trust and support one another, and never will we go to war and kill another. And we believe that one day under the same government that the bible speaks about will bring that worldwide soon, without ever dying.

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Joseph Anderson 18 February 2011

A caring, hopeful poem-my 86 years makes me doubtful- a great expression of what so many want-a 10 -thank you Joe

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Mohammad Muzzammil 16 February 2011

Would that it be possible in present era! Nowhere is such things in the world. The power has dominated over the truth and honesty, and mostly voices are trodden by force. So, if you find such world, I'll join you there.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

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Bahraich, U.P. India
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