Leaf (Haiku) Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Leaf (Haiku)

Rating: 2.5


Fresh and Green to touch
Yellow then turns to dried Brown
Like our Age that Flies

Sunday, July 27, 2014
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Morals have gone to extinction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 28 May 2015

A good Haiku and very nice comparison of a leaf and age. Try using small letters and not capitalization, the poem would look better that way.

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Bernadette Fernandez 25 May 2015

Time flies and our generations will leave but live

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Nancy Oyula 28 January 2015

I love Haiku........

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