Late Autumn- Haiku Written By Eiko San Poem by Elena Sandu

Late Autumn- Haiku Written By Eiko San

Rating: 5.0


Karamatsu bayashi
Naka akarukute
Fuyu ga susunde kita.


Larch trees grove naked
Inside, a splendid brightness
Winter came foward.




My humble first translation, I am sure it can be done better, my wish is to share this beautiful haiku. If anybody has a better way, please send me a message.I will be glad and happy to learn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 14 June 2021

So true and so brilliantly presented, the naked trees are winter's Seal.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 June 2021

A WOW haiku, dear Elena! We are now on the brandnew homepage of Poem Hunter and Team 5 Stars full for this beauty.

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Ray Schreiber 07 February 2012

Indeed a beautiful haiku... thank you for sharing.

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