Lady Unveiled Poem by Afeefa Khan

Lady Unveiled

Rating: 4.3


Late at night,
When I was lying on my bed,
Eyes open, lights off and door closed.

Tears flowing with,
Memories of flashback and,
My heart consoling me, better is yet to happen.

Suddenly, the door flashed,
The room got enlightened and,
My eyes pretended to sleep.

A women entered my room,
I exactly cannot describe,
The warmth she gave me that night.

I was still pretending asleep,
But slightly opened my eyes,
To see the unveiled face of the lady.

She right then saw me awake,
Came close to me, rolled in her arms,
And kissed on my forehead.

Her voice sounded soo soft as velvet,
Her footsteps imprinted the colors of rainbow,
Her smile redefining the beauty of a women.

I swear! It was the best feeling ever,
Received by me before never,
And only a Mother can give it to a Daughter.

Sunday, May 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mother daughter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is a real incident happened to me when i was 17. it took place after my breakup where i was crying in vein, but the entry of my mother pushed all the pain away :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 31 May 2015

I have long thought that mothers should be world leaders. Thanks for sharing, Afeefa

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Afeefa Khan 02 June 2015

yes you are right. mothers can also stand as fathers to their chilren and encourage in every aspect

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Ayman Parray 31 May 2015

The poem brings love and hope to my heart. Thanks for sharing, Afeefa

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Afeefa Khan 02 June 2015

your welcome :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Afeefa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 28 June 2015

Very nice poem indeed, having so much emotion has been expressed

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Mohd Shujaath Ali 06 June 2015

Good script but poor in expressions keep it up you will fill soul in it

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Lyn Paul 02 June 2015

Treasured moments with the warmth of love, not to be forgotten.

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Allotey Abossey 01 June 2015

Wow, your story is captivatingly interesting. It has a sense of suspense which forced me to read further and to love it. It reminds of one of my poems not yet to be published soon. God bless you

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Afeefa Khan 02 June 2015

thank you soo much :)

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