Keep Going Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Keep Going

Rating: 5.0


When darkness is deep
And life lies in a heap
Every step you take
Raises a cloud of dust
But you can't retreat
You have burnt your boats
Keep walking on,
For it's never too dark
Even under a moonless sky
Keep going, into the night
With a heart made of light.


Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Monday, October 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: courage,darkness,hope,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 02 October 2017

A beautiful poem, a lovely rhyme scheme and the message is universal.

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Rini Shibu 02 October 2017

Keep going with a heart made of light.. Conveying beautiful thought

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 October 2017

But you can't retreat You have burnt your boats Keep walking on, A great poem inspiring to walk along irrespective of the hurdles, nicely penned. A huge 10+++++ Regards. Subhas

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. March forward on darkness or in light is courageous step with better hope in life. It is a philosophical poem on life with stunning expression.

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Muhammad Ali 07 October 2017

with a heart made of light, we should accept every such heart, and there will be no darkness. beautiful poem Nosheen

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Dimitrios Galanis 20 December 2017

The most beautiful are the last two verses with their contra post of the words night-light.

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Kostas Lagos 31 October 2017

Never too dark! A beautiful optimistic poem.When I read it, I felt cool air blowing gently!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 19 October 2017

Like your optimistic enthusiasm and there is a great message in this very short poem of yours. (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

When darkness is deep and life lies in a heap, we fall in confusion and agony comes in life due to fear. Even under a moonless sky we shall walk in light of tenderness in freedom and courage. This is a very beautiful poem shared here. An interesting sharing is done here...10

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Valsa George 08 October 2017

If there is light inside, we needn't fear external darkness! We are not to be vanquished by hurdles but should boldly venture to overcome and proceed our journey dauntless! I see here the sparks of an indomitable spirit!

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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