Oh come, the day
come in my arms
I long to feel
the light as though
it's mine
Come, the words
in a waterfall
strike the pebbles
with all your love
I'm empty
as an un-sung joy
come, fill me
with poems.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
There is such great beauty in the succinctness of this poem. A very well deserved Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Nosheen!
A longing for fulfillment of desires nicely articulated. Thanks & Congrats.
A fabulous poem - -it is as if I am asking the day with its yellow light.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.
Being the morning person that I am, I like this one very much.I do most of my writing in the mornings. I like the way you blend sensual images with inspiration here.
I am not exaggerating. You are a genuine poet. A blessed soul. Go ahead! !
As unforgettable and great as I have never encountered before. The stars pale, at the spiritual greatness found in this brilliant Gem.
Awesome......Ray of hope and with full of positivity this poem goes straight to my favourite place..Congrats Dear Nosheen Ji...100+++