Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,722 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Justice Of Broken Dreams - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In the recesses
of a creased mind
lies the truth
of what is right

In the land
of truth and justice
lies broken dreams
where justice was not seen

Let us see


Comments about Justice Of Broken Dreams by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 6,651 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/23/2013 1:09:00 PM)

    Truth of justice nicely presented. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (9/21/2013 5:29:00 AM)

    A great write Dave, justice should be seen to be done and everybody should be entitled to justice. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (9/19/2013 3:33:00 AM)

    where justice not seen, lie scattered the broken dreams!

    great write, Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/18/2013 4:11:00 PM)

    Two worlds collide here, justice and truth.
    Look good together but are no where the same. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 20, 2013


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