Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,772 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Jealousy And Hate - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A distorted face
with jealousy and hate
a distorted mind
with rage they have to hide

They may have been victims
they may have seen somethings
they maybe hiding something
that they don't want you to see
they could have even been born like this

They maybe keeping a lie for someone
and finding it too much to bare
why else would they hate and despise
the way that they do

They don't like anyone
to have anything in life
all they want to do is hurt
with jealousy and hate


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Sadly there is a lot of people like this.

Comments about Jealousy And Hate by Dave Alan Walker

  • Bronze Star - 2,506 Points Clarence Prince (5/12/2013 12:49:00 PM)

    They maybe keeping a lie for someone
    and finding it too much to bare. Yet there's a solution, take it to God in Prayer! A real nice poem, well done, Dave! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 745 Points Shahzia Batool (5/12/2013 12:01:00 PM)

    they are helpless and miserable creatures, they dont even know that they harm themselves! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/12/2013 10:41:00 AM)

    Sadly you are correct. There are many people like that and as poets we can highlight this. Lovely write Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (5/9/2013 1:39:00 PM)

    ah! jealousy, its a disease...... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013


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