Just Lost! (Pleas Read And Vote) Poem by Melissa Schreuder

Just Lost! (Pleas Read And Vote)

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He was a good kid the one his little siblings looked up to,
he never cussed, never stole, never got into a fight,
a pure blooded boy. He went to school everyday, even when he was sick,
he had strait A's, and he was at the top of his class and his game.
nothing could stop him, or so he thought.
One day he went out with his friends to a party, he said to him self not to do anything stupid, but once he got there he had a great time, so much fun until his friend convinced him to drink, he refused at first but couldn't no more he wanted more fun, one glass after another. When he stopped he was dizzy, and couldn't see so he would pick up another glass, he was playing a game with his body called 'HOW FAR CAN YOU GO! ' when his body was to intoxicated to function right it made him more and more willing to drink not knowing what is going to happen to him when he does stop, because this was his first time drinking, he was always the designated driver out of his friends. when he had stopped drinking he started to get sleepy so he went in to one of the rooms that the party was held at and laid down, the next hour one of his friends come looking for him. when his friend did find he wasn't breathing, his skin is ice cold, his friend new he was dead and ran away. 'WOW YOU HAD JUST LOST YOUR GAME! '

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