Can'T Breath Poem by Melissa Schreuder

Can'T Breath

Rating: 4.3


I'm standing here in front of him
with red apple cheeks and with
stars in my eyes, his kiss like haven,
lips like clouds in the sky,
his hands on my body feels like
lightning rushing through my body.
he makes it hard to breath,
his kiss, his touch,
his lips the most.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like the beauty in your words. How more meaningful this poem is I think to people who can understand what true love is. Nice poem.

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Alan Curtis 11 May 2009

Short but sweet...I can dig it! ! Just go with the flow home grl, ur style is far from adverse. Peace and love! Hippy Sav

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Shilesha Johnson 26 June 2008

i know exactly how you feel. my boyfriend makes me feel the same way. nice poem

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