Just Inside The Shadows Poem by Heather Burns

Just Inside The Shadows

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Meeting in the long ago
constant and sincere

Standing in the shadows
Waiting for to hear

Approached you in the morning
just before the early dawn

Again in the evening
when the dew had left the lawn

You have always been there
emotions to fulfill

Standing in the shadows
you have and always will.

Sunday, October 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 06 November 2014

Standing in the shadows you have and always will.....................we move inside shadows...nice

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Akhtar Jawad 27 October 2014

The dim lights of dawn and dusk keep away the bright sunlight of the present. Shadow of conscious is not visible and then sub-conscious shadows of past rule the thoughts and the sentiments surrender to the sweet memories of love.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 October 2014

Heather is it prayer that we do morning and evening and remember the past with tears and smile..very touchy poem :) thank you

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Saint Cynosure 26 October 2014

Very, very good, I like it a lot...

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