Just End Poem by niki 5389

Just End

Rating: 5.0


Lying on a cushiony bed,
I was woked up by her vand of red.
The sweet voice rised me from the rest
Not knowing what will happen next.
She had a golden chariot with her
decorated with yellow stones of fire.
She took me with her hand
And placed me in the chariot adorned.
The spongy fur seat was a comforting one
that didn't gave a difference when the horse run.

The long way we passed by
had a shining moon with a slight shy.
The road was like a ribbon spread
made of black siliken thread.
The way was known only to her
while I was an idle on the seat of fur.
The coldness of night was stinging like a bee
that made me unable to fold my knee.
The heavy frosted night made me shrill
without making my touch a feel.
Quickly I turned back and my room was peeped
that was left behind when i had flewed.
And saw me still sleeping over there
made me a thick feeling of fea.r
Slowly I asked her what had happened
'my life in world has just been end'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Niki. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 February 2010

Gallery imagery fantasy galore … 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Keep it Up...Please

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