Journey Poem by Amitava Sur

Journey

Rating: 5.0


You are in core of my heart
With you I am whole.

I feel your blessing hands-
Are slowly approaching my soul.

I pray you, I need you
I feel you around me.

A heavenly peace calms me
I am in a journey with ease.

I have no face –
Formless in shape
I emanate with love and peace.

I am slowly diminishing -
In an unbound occult space

Where anything and everything
Is in a tranquil of peace.

Thursday, April 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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Amitava (2.04.2014) 1-30 am
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 15 December 2014

I am slowly diminishing - In an unbound occult space Where anything and everything Is in a tranquil of peace. an amazing write, I loved it..............10

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Valsa George 04 April 2014

If we can reach that state of bliss, no storm will ever come to rock us! This poem exudes a rare peace!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 April 2014

The journey is to eternity. Affinity is expressed beautifully. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 03 April 2014

A gentle poem, wistful and calming.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 April 2014

It is like you are a spirit, peaceful, totally. I like the feeling of this poem, Amitava. It's rhythm is softly flowing.

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