Irrepressible Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Irrepressible Love.

Rating: 5.0


After years, repressive relationships
Are reputed to stifle all need.
Dull acquiescence takes full control, whips
Until dead the tenderest soul, feeds
Despair until nothing survives, yet life
Is strange. Conditions can turn when firey
New love strikes again, from ether, love's knife,
Cutting through stony souls, un-clothes desire.
Re-lighting unstoppable dreams. Being part
Of the undying permanent, love makes
Sudden appearances, revives tired hearts.
Chances seized wholly is all that it takes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ngaio beck 29 December 2008

More beautiful wisdom for the romantically challenged. Mea Culpa!

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Bob Blackwell 20 December 2008

Fay, I agree undying permanent love is great, it has no doubts, worries or despairs.

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Tom Balch 18 December 2008

Life is strange, and so is love, nice piece Fay,10 from Tom

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Kris Smith 18 December 2008

When you are ageless love gets every chance to rekindle, take that chance enjoy I say Top write my friend 10 +++ Chris

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Fiona Davidson 18 December 2008

How very true Fay...enjoyed this poem very much...thank you

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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