Inside Out Poem by Black Love
Inside Out
I'm so sick, and tire,
Infected with where I live.
Let me live without this.
Just another relationship that doesn't work out.
There's a knife in my back, with my friends name on them.
Trying to relax, but the pain keeps running.
I cant trust no one and covered in scars.
I Sit here locked inside my head,
Remembering everything you've said.
All your insults make me feel like I'm worthless.
Everywhere I go I know they're looking down on me.
Even though they dont know me, they dont like me.
I can’t pretend I’m who you want me to be, so I rather be alone.
So, Let me take back my life.
I can't keep changing, just because you think I should.
We have never met. But yet i don't judge you. Let people think what they want to think it's their blues. A brilliant piece and I will be looking more from you Black Love. Best Regards. Craig.
Some nice sentiment here, but proofread a bit more, please. : ) bri p.s. I think your PH bio says you are 16 years old. Soooo, .... I guess you started wrote the poem when you were five or six? ! ! ! bri : )
Trying to relax, but the pain keeps running. I cant trust no one and covered in scars. I Sit here locked inside my head, ...... touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thank you dear Black, keep the ball rolling.,10
Nice poem ı like the way how you express your uncomfy with direct words to the antogonist.
i feal allot of what you say and a relationship is like like that the one you go with everyone you know knows of them but the one that clams you no one knows you but i have come to hate love but i write about it lol but i really like your poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal