Inside My Heart Poem by Aqua Flower

Inside My Heart

Rating: 5.0


Inside my heart
I hold you dear
for when I'm lonely
and you're not near
inside my heart
I hold so tight
this love
your love
that gets me through the night
inside my heart
I hold you close
this love
our love
no one knows
and when I wake I see your eyes
I see your love for me
behind those lies
don't hold back
you get one shot
Do you really love me
or love me not

Copyright @ Aqua Flower
Lion & Tigress series

Monday, August 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Jez Brul's love me, love me not poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 12 August 2019

Beautiful love poem..touching

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Bri Edwards 31 August 2019

2 – Lyn calls you a romantic (see her comment) . Which kind are you? ? " (A) ROMANTIC - noun 1 – (an/a) idealist, sentimentalist, romanticist; dreamer, visionary, or fantasizer”? OR 2 – “a writer or artist of the romantic movement" ? OR both? ! bri :)

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Aqua Flower 02 September 2019

Thank you for the definiti\ons of romantic. Lyn's comments is an opinion, The Tigress in the Lion and Tigress series is a romantic. She is both definitions.

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Bri Edwards 31 August 2019

1 – Topics: love & dreams It ain’t about heart valves? ? if only " hearts" were THAT simple! ! but you see love behind lies? ? ? ! ! ! i lied to a woman once because i DID love her and didn't want to hurt her,

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Bill Cantrell 15 August 2019

There are many poetic chambers in the heart, romance and love, the last 7 lines are priceless! ! A wonderful poem! !

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Aqua Flower 15 August 2019

Hello and thank you for your comment, I've had a dry spell in writing about love but Jez's poem really inspired me on this one. I'm glad you liked it! :)

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Lyn Paul 13 August 2019

Such sweet words penned. You are a true romantic.

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Aqua Flower 15 August 2019

Oh Lyn thank you for visiting and for your really nice comment. I was feeling very romantic when I wrote it. Hope you are doing well.

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Carl Roussell 13 August 2019

I really like the lines, don't hold back you get one shot Do you really love me or love me not Words so good at saying not to play games with the heart. Also, I have just reread 'Love Me, Love Me Not', and both poems are so complementary to each other.

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Aqua Flower 15 August 2019

That makes two of us. You always point out my favorite lines too. When writing a poet always likes a particular piece int he poem and hopes his readers recognize it as well. You've done just that. Thank you for reading and so happy you liked this one.

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