Fire Burning Poem by Aqua Flower

Fire Burning

Rating: 4.8


Behind closed doors
hearts collide
let us love once more
fire rages inside
as our eyes meet
coolness replaces heat
love feeds soul and mind
let us have that special time
where moments are forever
and forever is a fairytale
only in this storybook, love will prevail
our fire stays burning bright
as we kiss under the moonlight
the lion roars and the tigress purrs
in her heart, he is hers

Sunday, June 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fairy tale,passion,romance,romanticism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 June 2018

A sweet little romantic poem! My favorite lines: love feeds soul and mind/let us have that special time/where moments are forever /and forever is a fairytale! Moreover, the romantic urge reflected in the first six lines is captivating! Appreciated the ink! ...................10

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Aqua Flower 27 June 2018

Thank you...I'm so glad for you to visit this poem. The Lion and the Tigress is a story I enjoy writing about. :)

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Riza Braholli 01 July 2018

The Lion and the Tigress the two desires we have within us always... I four fire stays burning bright as we kiss under the moonlight the lion roars and the tigress purrs in her heart, he is hers avorite: congrats 10....10 for you, rizai

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Khairul Ahsan 12 October 2020

I know the about the ongoing love story between the tigress and the lion, through many of your poems written on them. It's a bittersweet tale, for many reasons. But the way you express the passion and love through your lines is simply brilliant. 'our fire stays burning bright as we kiss under the moonlight the lion roars and the tigress purrs in her heart, he is hers' - extremely beautiful and eloquent!

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Chinedu Dike 20 September 2020

Lovely and very romantic. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Sarah Shahzad 25 January 2020

Absolutely brilliant..! A most awesome and excellent sharing...! Bravo! ! ! Clever work :)

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Aqua Flower 25 January 2020

Thank you dear Sarah. Your comment is truly appreciated.

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Luz Hanaii 30 November 2019

Lovely and passionate love poem.

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A B Faniki 10 August 2019

Fun read. Love is indeed a fire and only someone can ignite it. Thanks 4 sharing. Is beautiful

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Aqua Flower 12 August 2019

Thank you for reading this older poem and having me come back and read it again too. The Lion and Tigress will never die for the memories will always remain.

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