Ing >>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Ing >>>



I know island thing
with tiny clothing
under trees smoking
passing time nothing
waiting for check came
spend it all on drinking

when night fall do something
we run around street selling
to tourist hungry for exciting
maybe one of you I met walking
I know you did am not telling
cause you're very nice; willing

Wednesday, December 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Herbert Poetry 22 December 2015

...a very nice poem with the ing. Intelligent

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Paul Warren 09 December 2015

Clever use of the ing at the end of each line. Conveys an air of the usual.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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