(#) Inexact Science Poem by Alice Cuenca

(#) Inexact Science

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an eye, squinting
through a microscope
bits and pieces unveiling.
almost naked.
an entity suspended
between heaven and earth
by a thread.
(or it could be the observer
forging an image of oneself?)

loving you is like
a sunlight-
heavy on my back,
two hours after the noon,
I, chasing my own shadow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Palero 18 January 2009

hawda nimu uie.. metaphoric keu kah mag sulat bah..nice! (^_^)

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Ric Bastasa 15 January 2009

it will take me time to understand this..the usual deep and choosy ways with words from candid candice.. nice penning without sleeping again?

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Ying Escalona 15 January 2009

so....why not train it to another direction...and let your own shadow chase you instead...

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