(#) The 'snow-Eater' Poem by Alice Cuenca

(#) The 'snow-Eater'

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a forceful chinook wind,
fast striding. unminding.
'snow-eater', the Indians say.

along the path, separating
the pond and traffic
her footsteps are heavy.

words of goodbyes
are piercing...
on a moonless night,
dreams are casting no shadows.

the sky is darkening now...
arch-shaped dusky clouds are
like bloody wounds. dripping
through the evergreen leaves.


warm wind in the mid-winter
can appease but can't unbreak
a heart as you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

The native people give such true characters to geographical happenings, in true human perspective, , we have many names for such winds, cold and warm, , well penned

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Mifael Llauderes 17 January 2009

i like the character of the chinook wind... and Indians as reference. it felts genuine. somber, and strangely nostalgic. but i agree we need more than a chinook wind to comfort a wintry life.

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Ric Bastasa 16 January 2009

wow.. painstakingly unbreaking.. good job mz cadiz..

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