Incertitude Poem by parveen tahir

Incertitude

Rating: 2.8


What surprising trees,
they were
Even deep shadows
were charing
What an earth that was
sliding beneath the feet
precarious dimensions
making the vision blurred
A desolated place...
Perhaps it was
the end of space
or the begining
of timelessness?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 08 February 2010

What an earth that was sliding beneath the feet precarious dimensions making the vision blurred....................awesome write 10/10

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Waqas Naeem 29 December 2008

I feel an eternity unravelling in these lines...deep thoughts, well written...

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Aijaz Asif 12 December 2008

ufff...marvellous, marvellous...a very strong use of metaphor and written in the way i adore most....your writng style is excellent ma'am and i hope i'll read other works soon too...thanks 10++++ and A+++..collected rgds asif

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