In The Heart Of Suffering Poem by Amine Fadil

In The Heart Of Suffering

Rating: 4.9


When the justice becomes blind,
And Dark surrounds mankind
Blood Suckers from blackness come out,
To kill, to tug, and serve the Dark,
By leaving shattered corpses behind,
And rivers made of blood.

Blood Suckers
Enjoy the fight, and moaning sounds,
On the bloody play grounds
Where Angels lost their smiles,
And begin to scream, and cry,
And feel the sorrow digging their heart.

Blood Suckers
With coldness; on the blood,
Bloodied Mothers' life,
Mourn, maim,
Stab, and sprain,
Burn, and break their hearts,
It's a Symphony of pain I write.

Blood Suckers
Why don't you let life goes on?
Leave Peace, and Love come back to life,
Even you,
Could live in Peace, Harmony, and sharing us the same love,
By stopping shedding Innocents' blood,
Causing blight;
At every place, and side
Day and night.

Monday, September 17, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 17 September 2012

If only this was possible, but sadly I think not. This a thought provoking piece of writing. Thank You

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Allemagne Roßmann 23 September 2012

Very well said birader over the blood sucker....but they do not accept they are..irony continues therefore...A very deep and informative write.

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Kelvin Owusu 24 September 2012

you are a very good writer how your structure your poetry very well done

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Hazel Durham 25 September 2012

A heartfelt plea to stop the bloodshed of war, great write!

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nawal hajjami nawalou 17 March 2023

i want to congratulate you for this magnific poeme, and wish you a good life by the hand of god! keep continuing and peace will be true by the hand of god! so much suffer and war and so much troubles, we wish the one love aand peace will be the future of hmanty, good luck

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Shania K. Younce 13 March 2014

Very well put. Bien!

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

Blood Suckers Why don't you let life goes on? Wow! it really makes me feel something deeply.

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Danny Draper 11 October 2012

Well said and I agree with you and Thomas A Robinson. War is easy but peace is difficult but ultimately is a healthy body for humanity to grow and prosper.

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Eindaray Kyaw 05 October 2012

You meant to blood sucker..this is allusive poem I like to find out the points of such poem....Thank you Well done! !

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