In Obscurity Poem by Jose Chavez

In Obscurity

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If you sharpen your finest weapon
And attempt to penetrate my soul
It will be like swinging a blade
Through the elusive morning fog

There is no stopping the will
Of a determined man
You can't disrupt the peace
Of an unbreakable spirit

Try as hard as you can
But my demise is not in your hands
My destiny is in full flight
And only I direct its course

Conspire if you may
Just know awareness is virtue
Im always one step ahead
WIthout ever having to move

The strength I have within me
Has turned you into a fool
You mock at my tranquility
Assuming its the roar that causes pain

Unaware of the power I behold
As you are unable to see
Like a fish in the ocean's depth
It is obscured from sight

Within my soul it churns
Gathering potency in quietude
While constantly enduring
An ever-lasting fight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2012

its well written.. imaginative.. power of love.. i liked it, , ,

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2012

very nice poem... powering of love.. imaginative.. i liked your writing style...

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