'In Love For You' Poem by Lindemberg Pereira da Silva

'In Love For You'



I thought I wouldn't never be able to fall in love
I thought my heart wouldn't never get used to someone
I thought that love would be maybe
an easy excuse for you to stay with me,
Or an easy way to escape from myself.

Your heart was always lied on my hands,
And your lips were so easy to touch.
You were always so easy to hold,
But something was always annoying me
A thought that I never could hide from my mind
That now I'm in love
In Love For You.

Could you possibly tell me
'How did it happen? '
Could you possibly tell me
'That's just a dream, it is not real.'
But everytime when I look at your face
I see that what I feel now
You feel the same way I do.
If it is true, if it is real
Take my fear away
My fear of being in love
In Love For You.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monica O'Connor 08 March 2010

i like this poem alot, you really write beautifully, and i think that alot of your readers, myself included can relate to alot of the situations you write about, especially this one. being in love alone is a terrible thing. since you critiqued me, im going to take this opportunity to return the favor. double negatives are not good! when you use two negative words next to each other, it contradicts the statement, making it positive. for example, you wrote: 'i thought i wouldn't never fall in love' wouldn't is a compound, which breaks down into 'would not' so you technically wrote: 'i thought that i would not never fall in love' which means, 'i thought i would fall in love' what you should've said was: 'i thought that i would never fall in love' which is the message you were trying to say. other than that, this has become a favorite of mine. props: ]

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