In A Nutshell - Self-Pity Poem by Lora Colon

In A Nutshell - Self-Pity

Rating: 5.0


Cry when you feel sorry for yourself,
You're the captain of your sinking ship;
Rebuke the fool who says "Things could be worse, "
He's not seen the whole iceberg..... just the tip!

Friday, March 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 March 2019

You're the Captain of your life! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kavya S Babu 09 March 2019

Superb write! ! ! Good thought.

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Bri Edwards 26 November 2019

why the was my previous comment so brief? ! ! ! now i say " wow" and " well done....good and faithful poet! " this time i got a fine (loud) laugh from last line. thanks. and.........speaking of Thanks...have a fruitful Thanksgiving. You know: apples, raisins, bananas, papayas, cranberries............. the Best to YOU.....each morning...with a K e double l, double g, ...don't forget the " o" ....and " s" . bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 22 March 2019

this is a pip! bri ;) where shall it (poem) go? where else? MyPoemList!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2019

This beautiful poem gets 10/10 from me.

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Kim Barney 19 March 2019

Very clever thoughts and rhyming. This not only brought a smile to Glen's face, but to mine as well.

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Glen Kappy 13 March 2019

this brought a smile to my face, lora. -glen

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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