Cry when you feel sorry for yourself,
You're the captain of your sinking ship;
Rebuke the fool who says "Things could be worse, "
He's not seen the whole iceberg..... just the tip!
why the was my previous comment so brief? ! ! ! now i say " wow" and " well done....good and faithful poet! " this time i got a fine (loud) laugh from last line. thanks. and.........speaking of Thanks...have a fruitful Thanksgiving. You know: apples, raisins, bananas, papayas, cranberries............. the Best to YOU.....each morning...with a K e double l, double g, ...don't forget the " o" ....and " s" . bri ;)
this is a pip! bri ;) where shall it (poem) go? where else? MyPoemList!
Very clever thoughts and rhyming. This not only brought a smile to Glen's face, but to mine as well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You're the Captain of your life! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.