I'm Leaving Poem by Quasir Hassan

I'm Leaving

Rating: 5.0


A flash, green not so old
It was a cry, and cries of cold

Not a reverie nor a dream
What is said, is a real scene

The cry was the cry of a lily frail
Withering and wailing for drizzle or hail!

Amidst the dark, some hubbub was heard
Followed those; who abhorred and admired!

In throes of death, soul shrieked!
Jaws moved unheeded!

Some kneeled to kiss the feet..
Some sighed and some weep

Hands froze, lips strove to speak...
I'm leaving, I'm leaving

I'm  Leaving
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem describes the death scene of the poet!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aasif Shah 18 February 2023

Beautiful poem & a priceless expression.

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"I am leaving" is a fantastic slogan.., for death is the only reality. Nice

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