If You Want— Then Go Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

If You Want— Then Go



If you want— then go
I am not sitting on roads
Like barricades

Purplish breeze touching azure sky
Aroma of fine arts walking
Flowers blooming from ring tone

Your clamorous pictures
Calling from cell’s memory card
I am butterfly on your heart

If you want— then go
I am not sitting on roads
Like barricades

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Saqib 27 June 2009

leaving some one on his or her behalf is a good way of treatment

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Ency Bearis 27 June 2009

A don't mind attitude...as implied....

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 27 June 2009

nice piece, to the point, thaks for sharing

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Winnie Angel 27 June 2009

A beautiful piece with much frankness and being oneself perfectly..Winnie

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Donall Dempsey 28 June 2009

So surreally real. The concepts are eyecatching and the images continue to linger longingly. love Dónall Dónall

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Raj Nandy 01 July 2009

WHAT IF, AFTER READING THIS MOVING PIECE, IT DECIDES NOT TO GO! AND LIKE A BUTTERFLY, - TRIES TO SIT ON THE BARRICADE'S DOOR? ! 10! -Raj Nandy

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a beautiful sweet writing..loved it

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Smiley Hooker 30 June 2009

hmm...i think that one doesn't really wanted to go...maybe just waiting for the butterfly's heart to soften a little. enjoyable read! : -)

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wow what a wonderful creation! ! ! ! i can picture in my mind the brilliant images you have here...thanks best regards, jdh

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Marieta Maglas 29 June 2009

''Purplish breeze touching azure sky Aroma of fine arts walking Flowers blooming from ring tone'' This double visual metaphor, that consists of tangibility between visual and sonorous fields suggests the feelings that are generated by waiting a call.''Flowers blooming'' means the renaissance of the feelings.10

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