Let’s Go Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Let’s Go

Rating: 5.0


Like a multi-colored kite
Cuddling fragrance of
Soft wooly clouds—
Upon the navy blue
Below the cruel soil
Let’s go—

Beyond the mysterious
Endless space
Non-feelings zone—
Cutting the navel cord
Of unkind time
Let’s go—

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 09 June 2009

Let's go and fly...care free of time...WOW! ! ! Another phrasing poem crafted meticulously...10+++

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 June 2009

a poem full of freedom... lovly write...10 up..

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Such a flowing vivid poem. I feel like wooshing away with the kite! 10 Karin Anderson

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Lady Grace 09 June 2009

feel free like a kite..run as the clouds fades...dropp when tired and goooooo againnnnnnnnnnnn....love the insight of this..grace

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beautifullllllllllllllll call for the that travel to that free zone...smoothly penned as weightless wind which soar above all...10++++ Beyond the mysterious Endless space Non-feelings zone— Cutting the navel cord Of unkind time Let’s go—

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Brishti Mazumdar 16 June 2009

....Soft wooly clouds— Upon the navy blue Below the cruel soil Let’s go— Wow...excellent thought process...10++

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Rakesh Bedi 16 June 2009

Beyond the mysterious..... You excel here friend! From a physical void to mete-physical void! !

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Sandra Martyres 16 June 2009

Reminds me of the freedom expressed in the song...Lets go fly a kite up into the atmosphere....lovely piece 10+

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Mona Martinez 14 June 2009

nice poem. your words fit this so perfectly.

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Vijay Gupta 12 June 2009

nice poem. thanks for writing it.....

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