If I Were God And Then What Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

If I Were God And Then What

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If I were God but then what?
Would you do what I said,
if it improved your life, I think not.
Would you in school, learn and pray?
Giving in to you, in life to know,
even if I, disapproved?
Consuming it all, then leaving none
to know what I knew, all along.
Naked in the window she stands,
staring out into my grand scheme of things.
Some learn to forget, I forget what I've
learned, in the end forgotten by you.
Bushes burn, tree's stand tall, deep rooted
and proud.
Proud of there depth running inside, every
thought, I've had about you.
If I were God and then what, what would you
change about you.

Friday, May 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: green
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Did you notice the eye beneath the left little finger.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walkerjohn 27 May 2016

Aloha James... Fine endeavour my brother bard! It is difficult to guage the reaction of an ingorance... and this is not gorry... this is reality... go figure! I shined this coin up good! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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