If I Could Write Apoem That, , Poem by aliyah aliyah

If I Could Write Apoem That, ,



if i could write apoem
thats going to stop the hate in this world
i would start writing it now

if i could write apoem
thats going to stop the sadness in this world
i would take all my life to write it

if i could write apoem
thats going to stop the pain in this world
i would throw every thing in my hand
and write this poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Aliyah, I love your poem. It shows your great feeling of Love for the World. Keep up the writing! The world and humanity need voices of Peace and Love in the World like yours. Great job and please keep writing! ! ! Peace and Love

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Raghavan Warrier 07 December 2006

Nice poem. But I beg to differ. If there is no hate in the world, people won't appreciate love. If there is no sadness, there waon't be pleasure too. Everthing bad is the justification for something good. Only two sides of a coin.

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Joshua Fegley 01 December 2006

What about greed? What about money? Eliminate these first....then go from there. Nice poem....

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