…dead Body Walking… Poem by aliyah aliyah

…dead Body Walking…



You set there smiling in my face
Acting as if you know me well
While you know nothing about me
Or what I have been throw
Do you know how many nights I cried?
What happened to me when I was five years old?
Do you know how many times I faked a smile?
How many secrets I hided inside?
No one sow me crying before
They don’t know that my tears had fade long time ago
I have no tears left inside
No feelings, no emotions
I am just a dead body walking
I have no goals in life to achieve
People ask (why you don’t care?)
I stopped caring long time ago
Since no one cared about me before
Life is not fair and I know that
But I knew that too early
I am just a dead body walking
I know this dead body will never be alive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

You set there smiling in my face Acting as if you know me well While you know nothing about me Or what I have been throw Do you know how many nights I cried? well done... its really an inspiring poem..amazed to know that you are doing good poetry.. proved you are doing good... the same way i also rote a poem but enough different..appreciate your poem 10+++++++++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 January 2009

Time keeps changing. It will be on your side one day and you will be alive again. One should not loose hope.

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Vinod Kumar 08 January 2009

Human mind is wonderful that is the award of the lord, to imagine so many levels, a very good vision of loss and agony i found in it, but all should change emotions, joy, sad etc. nothing cant stay still times may differ. good poem. thanks for sharing.

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Jeannie Ann Clark 23 February 2008

Sad writing, but written well. Keep writing and expressing clear thoughts. Thank you.

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