Ideal Couple Poem by Abdul Wahab

Ideal Couple

Rating: 4.8


What should be the qualities
Of ideal lovers?

Should they look alike
Like two stars?

Or should they see
Same wave length

and hear
The same pitched, same music

And you know how sincerely we tried them all
As we wanted to be an ideal couple

We grazed together like doves
And feel the same breeze on the same road

But what happened last, we stranded on our own ways
Perhaps you know

she saw more than she should have seen
I heard more than I should have heard

If you want to be ideal lovers
Put off her eyes
And take out your ears

As a blind and a deaf
Make a couple, ideal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 27 May 2013

Well is there such a thing as ideal lovers? This is a great question, very difficult to answer. Probably your last two sentences answered your own question. (put off her eyes and take out your ears. As a blind and deaf make a couple ideal.) that's about what it would take. thoughtful write, nice.

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Ruby Mostazir 27 May 2013

interesting massage...... all da couple should it. lol

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David Wood 27 May 2013

Being in love makes you blind to others faults. A good write

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Farah Ilyas 26 May 2013

ah what a definition defined by you of a ideal couple. If you want to be ideal lovers Put off her eyes And take out your ears As a blind and a deaf Make a couple, ideal indeed deep poem with deep message...great

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