Abdul Wahab

Ideas (Suggestions Invited) - Poem by Abdul Wahab

I am an aspirant
To be a poet

Thinking hard
All the time

Ideas are conceived
But they behave like the friends of facebook

Very abrupt and disconnected
While I am in the move

They are prominent
When I am on the potty
Or on the bed

I stand up
They started to become faint

When I put down them
Like of any wife
They lost their charm

Comments about Ideas (Suggestions Invited) by Abdul Wahab

  • Silver Star - 3,857 Points Wahab Abdul (11/5/2012 9:56:00 AM)

    thank you very much for the beautiful comment. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,848 Points Ken E Hall (11/5/2012 3:39:00 AM)

    The idea of the poem is a good idea rather funny cute, so I suggest close your eyes think of what NOT to do next then the flood gates of ideas will flow like the Amazon...cheers (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 31, 2012

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