Ideas (Suggestions Invited) Poem by Abdul Wahab

Ideas (Suggestions Invited)



I am an aspirant
To be a poet

Thinking hard
All the time

Ideas are conceived
But they behave like the friends of facebook

Very abrupt and disconnected
While I am in the move

They are prominent
When I am on the potty
Or on the bed

I stand up
They started to become faint

When I put down them
Like of any wife
They lost their charm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 05 November 2012

thank you very much for the beautiful comment.

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Ken E Hall 05 November 2012

The idea of the poem is a good idea rather funny cute, so I suggest close your eyes think of what NOT to do next then the flood gates of ideas will flow like the Amazon...cheers

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