I Will Exceed Your Expectations Poem by breanna givens
I Will Exceed Your Expectations
I am one in a billion that won’t make it in this world, that’s what they see me as…… but I am what I make me. I will dropp out of school my tenth grade year, that’s where they push me …… but ill go where life takes me. I will be pregnant before I graduate, that’s what they want….. But I have something better planned. I will die without love, that’s what they think……. But I don’t need a man. No one will ever hold me and care, that’s what they wish…… but God has my hand. I will die without a purpose fulfilled, that’s what they hope……. But my choices will expand. One day I will be president, that’s what they doubt......... but look who’s already proved you wrong. I will be better one day, that’s what they try to stop………… but that day has already gone! ! ! !
By: Breanna Givens
Breanna, good luck...., this is very nice and optimistic, but your word usage in the title seems incorrect. You can check on it further, but I believe it should be, 'I Will Exceed Your Expectations' or 'I Will Achieve Your Expectations'...., NOT....., 'I Will Succeed Your Expectations.' Regards, Trade.
This one is good. But how about some indentation? Nice expression though. Just keep strong like that :)
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4/26/2024 7:20:32 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow! I love your great positive attitude in this touching, well penned and very optimistic write! I felt like that when I wrote my poem titled: INNER STRENGTH, I moved on and here I am trying to inspire the World the rest of my life! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep it up, you are in the right track! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...