I Was Able To Talk To You For The First Time Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

I Was Able To Talk To You For The First Time

Rating: 4.5


I was able to talk to you for the first time
An evening without delicious mood
Crossing a thousand illusions
Will our love even reach anything?
I'll run through the spears of falling stones
Raise both your hands higher into the sky
Gave me a small but sure warmth
Fighting and loving
It's just a mirage

(dedicated to a great poet, Alberto Ríos)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 24 September 2009

with love there is no distance. gr8888t write a ten

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Ruerd Visser 22 September 2009

A wise man once said every human being is a world al by itself, and when two human beings meet two worlds meet. Some alike and some very distant. But we can build a bridge between those worlds nomather how far apart they may seem, if only we set ourselvbe to understand what brings us togehter. Who knows what seems to be a mirage can also be a sign there is something waiting to be explored between to souls whom meet. Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 September 2009

Love at first sight ended in a mirage finally.

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Kuji Soliman 21 September 2009

touching...welll written, keep up the good work :) 1000000000000/10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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