I Wish You To Always Feel Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

I Wish You To Always Feel

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I wish you to always feel
as I advance without regretting
you fight beside me
without any doubts
sparkling in dream
engulfing passionate life
let's ride upon tornado
combining our hopes
let’s lay your hand on me
and look at the sun's brightness

(dedicated to a great poet, Ms.Cathy Song)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 18 September 2009

well, this is a nice piece again...am sure she likes this..

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Catrina Heart 18 September 2009

A nice love poem vivid and succicnt......lovely!

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 18 September 2009

lovely small poem.......

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 18 September 2009

lovely small poem.......

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Omar Ibrahim 18 September 2009

when i look at your sun i see the beauty of your poetry in it...happy because it is up in the sky and won't decend as i said in my poem about you.......

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Kuji Soliman 21 September 2009

This poem is my favourite that you've written yet! please write more! 10++

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Indira Babbellapati 20 September 2009

riding on tornadoes and feeling the sun...wow!

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Louis Rams 19 September 2009

lets ride upon tornado continuing our hopes. that you would take the hand of another in flight is really dynimite. good dedication again

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Christina Phan 18 September 2009

wonderful job im speechless so nothing else too say 10+

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Juan Carlos Abeti 18 September 2009

good good good i running out of words here.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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