I Want Water Poem by JOE POEWHIT
I Want Water
Just dont taste good.
Whats wrong-number one water.
So the rice grower, ' said'.
You maybe want more.
Feel like a shut door.
Water just dont feel right.
Acid-rain- blurring my sight.
Number one water-BOY.
Please dont tell me more.
YOU MUST HAVE WATER.
YOU number -1,1,1,1, -wont live.
Water shock to the body.
Water just dont feel right.
Must have some water, water.
WHAT YOU MEAN-YOU WANT -WATER.
Out on the block -GIRL.
BABY NEEDS WATER.
YOE, YOE, YOE-you got-WATER
MAN-KEEP YOUR COOL.
YOE-COOL water MAN.
COOL WATER
WATER.
WAT.
W.
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i love water festival...songkran in thailand. good write poewhit
Once again you amaze me with such bottomless stupidity....bravo
A poem floating on the deep waters of life and poetry.
I like your diversity with this one, using various techniques (1,1,1, - capitals, [[[ ]]]) . You paint the scene and successfully relate the action of this one-act play. I can hear the voices and see the gestures. Keep experimenting.
water is life...................and from life.......we live!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 5:06:21 AM # 1.0.0.1119
An interesting write that can be open to interpretation All the best Love duncan X