I Saw A Poem On My Way Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
I Saw A Poem On My Way
I saw a poem on my way
On the writers' valley side
Found it broken, stranded, limp
Taking time to go upside
I altered a few pairs of words
To make them feel reconciled
I watched the poem climb the hill
In rhyming, rhythmic style
On arriving home by night
On my writing table side,
I found the poem greet me
With a thankful enchanting smile!
24th Jan 2020
The writer's effort at modification is metaphorically presented and it has a real novelty. Enjoyed seeing the poem effortlessly climbing up....!
A seed needs seasoning for a healthy growth before it is sown. Thanks for your nice words on my poem Valsa..
Beautiful poetic expression that conveys the point well. Yes, a poem should be a poem, not a heavy and unwieldy prose that cannot climb up. Great style dear poet.
Right words there, Shree Pathak. Certain words indeed hang heavy. Thanks a lot for your insightful comment. Liked
A nice imagination in your own unique style....very much amusing
The mind wanders to create visuals to its taste. We call it imagination. Thanks a lot Indira, for your nice feedback
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 10:34:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Style! ! Creativity Poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.