I Sat Down To Write A Line... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I Sat Down To Write A Line...



I sat down to write a comment line
Over two cups of good red wine
Listening to the midnight rain-
In one poem 'Rain' I mean

Missing out there the inside 'n'
By the wine high me in
Came out blinking off my pen
A 'lie' that didn't rain!

PS: (added since)
The letter ‘n' on my keyboard is playing havoc. Typing often fails. I wanted to add a comment ''a good line'' over a poem read. What came out was ''a good lie''. My poet friend got wild and fired me off his list!
This funny experience tempted me to come out with this write. Thanks



May 6th 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fathmath Sana 16 May 2009

nice poeam. gr8t story buddy.10/10 hope u'll write more, thnx sana

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Carol Gall 16 May 2009

good poem has humor and i like it thanks

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Luis Gil 16 May 2009

Some truly good lies..... Take care, Kesav

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premji premji 17 May 2009

made me laugh a lot.............loved it.......

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Danny H 17 May 2009

xD thats so cool and creative funny experience to write on as well.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 January 2010

'This N… The Zen Helps you to contemplate And encapsulate Your pen P ~ O ~ E ~ M*.' ~ niv Ms. Nivedita UK --- * For each alphabet two and half into four is equal to Ten

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

I love this, though it may cause me to experiment with alphabetical excursions..(smile)

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Catrina Heart 15 July 2009

Friends are shapes Flow around the space Friends are angles Sharing common symmetrical patterns Sometimes like Numbers Even or odd – you’ll remember In simple or complex life’s equation TRUE Friends share honest opinion Hence.......Even without N It won't change the condition Thanks!

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Kesav Easwaran 21 May 2009

Yes; missing boldly! Thanks Chitra...liked your witty comment

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Chitra - 21 May 2009

Very amusig, thaks to the electroic revolutio ad the side effects that come with it.. do you fiNd aNything missiNg in the first few words of my commeNt :)

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