I must try haiku,
There is nothing left to do,
But try something new,
Have I got it now?
Should I not include a cow?
I think not somehow.
This will take some time,
I’m committing haiku crime,
Not a verse should rhyme
So I’ll start again
And from rhyming I’ll refrain
Feeling quite inane
Doolittle said it thus
By George I think she's got it,
Con-que-ring hai-ku
See the setting sun,
Reflect gold upon the sea,
Clouds hold dazzling hue.
the rhyme added rhythm.. to this fine piece..... nicely done.
Very nice Alf....very clever and very funny......great work my friend....smiles 10
You have done it fine Including the crime of rhyme Which adds a nice touch
Haiku is a most important part of literature. Haikus are poignant and deep in thought.
haha, this is funny..trying to write a haiku....but i must say....you did succeed by the last stanza!
Even I don't know to write haiku...I want to try...your poem is a lesson...I like the last one...I guess if I am right, haiku is a smart sentence arranged colourful...thanks a lot for this funny piece
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i love it, I think it's one of my favorites out of your poems! ! ! ! ! i really loved how it rhymed even in haiku