I Miss You Poem by Nomad Omnia

I Miss You

Rating: 3.1


I miss you when I awake in the small hours of the
Morning, aching so deep I cannot sleep.
It is you I crave – only with you beside me can there be peace.

This was not meant to be – it cannot be! I rage inside
To know that you cannot be mine. I reach across dark miles;
Are you, too, awake – curled on your side in foetal agony?

And in the morning I must pretend that I am rested,
Bright and ready for a new day. And that you, my love,
Are just another smile in my circle of happy friends.

This fire inside is held in check for love of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

sincere and true the rhythm is superb as is the poem

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Sonya Florentino 20 August 2009

'I reach across dark miles' love that line...and in the morning, smile-pretend, surrounded by friends....

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Jacqui Thewless 21 August 2009

Honest, no-nonsense love-ache poem. Hits the spot.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 25 April 2018

True suffering for love, , , .

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Chinedu Dike 15 April 2015

Lovely romantic piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 December 2009

I understand this completely, almost word for word. Regards.

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Smiley Hooker 24 October 2009

I read lines from deep within your heart. I can feel the over-flowing emotions. I love it, thanks for sharing! :)

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Sandra Fowler 09 September 2009

These lines were written by an extraordinary wordsmith. Your pain reaches out across the dark miles to touch the souls of your readers. 10/10. Kind wishes, Sandra

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