I Made Fool Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
I Made Fool
I made fool of my self
I was searching treasure in sea shelf
It was thinking of my own
The consequences were unknown
I claim to be natural lover
Staunch supporter and believer
Never side with deforestation
As I want to feel and have close relation
In life too I wanted her
But it seemed she did not bother
Never looked at even at my face
I had lost her in real race
I tried to call her by name
But words were not to claim
She just walked away with scant respect
I was like stupid pig in my act
I feel shy to narrate
But definitely I got to state
How cruel she was in her approach
I felt so bad at heart as such
I was no less prominent
I was well to do and looked intelligent too
I do not know what went in my disfavor
She did hurt my pride and honor
I never knew pigs were stupid until I read I made fool. Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Feb 12,2014
When I was reading your piece I couldn't hide my smile.It is wonderful and great piece with constructed stanzas! Thank you for sharing this piece! ......With worm regards! Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling Feb 12,2014
A Wonderful poem...Beautiful lines... I was no less prominent I was well to do and looked intelligent too I do not know what went in my disfavour She did hurt my pride and honour... Loved reading it.
well done Richard Thompson II3 minutes ago ^^^^^ Comment +1
Good Hasmukh Ronald Maynard2 minutes ago It is full of emotion. It is dynamic. Putting feelings down on a page is never a mistake. Sometimes you discover the answer to why just by writing. It is not a bad poem.
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I would like to translate this poem
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I made fool of my self I was searching treasure in sea shelf