I Love You... I'M Lying Poem by Aez NewHeller

I Love You... I'M Lying

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I LOVE YOU
sounds good to my ear,
it sucks though,
heartache's what i fear..

being loved,
it feels so damn great!
and i have
doubts that ameliorate

i said yes,
but didn't mean it
and i guess
you lied, admit it

pretending,
in love with each other?
both laughing...
i dont even know you mister!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2016

pretending, in love with each other? both laughing... i dont even know you mister! love, pretending, insincerity..... love you . how we often misuse it.... all these ideas are very clearly brought in, in this poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Marieta Maglas 07 January 2010

pretending, in love with each other? both laughing... i dont even know you mister nice lyric poem

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Karen Palero 29 November 2009

i've searched that song... and yea, the only similar thing about that song and this poem is that both shows how the word 'I love you' is misused and abused.. i think the guy in the s0ng and I are aliked, lol.. that's why id like to think that that 'Mister' in the poem is also lying so that i wont be disturbed by my conscience. LoLz.

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This kinda reminds me of the song sexual powertrip by blue october. But then again not, cause the feeling is not mutual in the song. Anyways, I liked your poem maybe if you look up that song you'll know what the heck i'm rambling about.lol.

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