I Love You Poem by Ayi Escalona

I Love You

Rating: 5.0


When I am dead and darkness reigns
My body decays but the soul remains
To the breeze t'will float
Whispering 'I Love You' though mute

My decayed body will soon be powdered
Like dust in wilderness that eyes are scared
Whereupon mourning tears are shed
Dust molds....'I Love You' and thy hearts comforted

In happiness you shall remember
For death has not put us asunder
In world next still we meet
Where everlasting bliss are set

Here...this earth is just a mere river
Creatures lives are its water
Death.... the mightiest current
That brings all to world beneath

My absence will be that distance to consider
Pondered afar yet so near
Your eyes may stare but soul's unseen
The soul that float to wind's burden

When in darkness trail thy love shall be my light
Thy preserved fidelity is my soul's delight
And let all prayers spent be replied
'I Love You' till you're in my side

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Shanazar 19 October 2007

Nice poem with the depth of meanings, see the poem grammatically, it is not to discourage you, I myself am not a native english writer too. I may help you in this regard if you feel it hard. Send your poem to me through email, I shall check its grammar and return to you then upload it where ever you wish. When I am dead and darkness reign My body decays but the soul remain When I am dead and darkness reigns My body decays but the soul remains shanazar@hotmail.com I think you will not mind. Shanazar

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 04 December 2007

Thank you for the comment, I very much enjoyed this piece. Deep and ever true.

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Miaka Yuki 07 December 2007

love touches the heart of every human in this universe..love of such intensity and passion is exquisite...very beautifully written and thanks for the comment.... u write really heart-touching poems and i especially loved this one

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Elizabeth T. 02 January 2008

Thank you for the comment. This poem is very inspiring- and well written

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Ewigi Liebe 09 January 2008

beautiful and very hearthfel and love are flowing in this poem....thank you kabayan.

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Marieta Maglas 08 April 2010

wonderful lyric poem, deep feelings well embedded 10/10

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Ken E Hall 06 December 2009

love poem written from the heart with deep feelings on until the after life fine poem Ariel thanks+++++10 regards

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 October 2009

a good concept exploded nicely.10 marks shan

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Ilse Gudiño 26 October 2009

Beautiful Poem Ariel, its a wonderfull way to write... Thanks for comment on my poem also.... Hope to talk to you later... Take Care

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Reshma Ramesh 14 September 2009

beautiful love poem........

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