I Know That Poem by Wali Jamali
I Know That
I know that i love you
I know that you will desert me
I know that print-marks on your neck will vanish.
But,
I will be there
Waitnig for you
Till monsoon comes
To water the my daisies.
I know that
Torrential rain will erase ploughed-lines
And the marks of the bullocks.
My fields will get watered-down
Like your lips had before.
I know that
Next season
My un-kissed lips
Will have a different tase
And your neck
Shall have no imprints of love.
But,
You like a barren-field
Will stay bare and un-touched
To wait for caresses.
This time
Monsoon may strike back
But,
Not I.
Wonderful piece xoubiya. His fields shall remain barren till your love shall water them again. But your love shall not be wasted on fools. 10.
sounds like a poem from a heart broken, , , sorry to read it but good composition and words used.
very enthralling xoubiya...what i marvelled at was how youve dne the poem up the sadness is somehow enhanced romantically by the allusions to nature and the process of rebirth from dust....healing always comes from nature...thats always been my belief.well done.
Xoubiya dear--your poem stole my heart away. loved every word of it. so touching. ++++10 as always lovessssssssss anju
lovely indeed....the cosy monsoon of togetherness...the torrential rains of parting...a wonderful picture of love, hope and affirmation given in subtle words. Thanks for sharing.....10 from me.
intizaar..........it surely is a marvellous write ma'am you defined beautifully almost the whole story of loved, being apart and yearing for togetherness again or i might have guessed it wrong, if i did please do forgive me with a smile like a 'painter' in my poem...thanks for sharing 10++++ rgds asif
how well you've shown that we humans are an integral and inseperable part of nature
Dear Xoubiya Jamali, This is a very good poem. Your view and the inner meaning of this poem is very nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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' you're the monsoon that swipes my heart away into your dying arms'Beautiful piece my dear friend xoubiya.Shabas! ! !