I Keep Trying To Hold On Poem by Sara Panicali

I Keep Trying To Hold On

Rating: 4.8


I keep trying to hold on
to these feelings of being alone
the times we've shared
I never want to let go
as painful as they are
and all the pain we put each other through
and all the broken promises you made

I keep trying to hold on
to stay by your side
to show she isn't the one
for you
and how she is
hoping you'll wake up and realize
before I'm gone

I keep trying to hold on
and take the comfort from
a stranger I hardly know
to try and help from not going insane
from the pain of losing you
and everything we had and done
no matter who I am by
I always seem to think of you
and always will

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C S 14 May 2012

I know the feeling, lovely poem.... very expressive, you write very well

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Indira Babbellapati 06 January 2012

pain...pain...n more pain! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 03 January 2012

You may find love in someone else, you may not think it yet, but someone out there is waiting to change your life. Great poem.

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Subodh Pandey 29 December 2011

nicely written verse. but i feel sometimes loneliness too can be a stepping stone.

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