I Have Decided Poem by Sandra Martyres

I Have Decided

Rating: 5.0


Each time I try to show you
A better way to do
Something or
To deal with
Someone
You retaliate with
A nasty repartee
So from today
I have decided
To leave you
To your own devices
My advice I will only
Share
if you care enough
to ask for it,
or if you dare

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Runita Menezes 03 May 2009

Go girl. Do not give precious advice to the undeserving. Let them find their own way. Good write. Runi

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Kesav Easwaran 03 May 2009

it's always good to spare advices...perhaps one may need them for oneself...strong and sharp words polished bright...10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 May 2009

This is a good attitude we must have. But out of our love towards others/friends, often we go out of way to advise them. Your pick of subjects is wonderful Sandra............so much of variety

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Meggie Gultiano 03 May 2009

a nice write...thanks

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Raj Arumugam 08 May 2009

a slice of life so skilfully expressed...

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Crazy Vampire 03 June 2009

nice poem. i can actually picture this. someone telling someone there opinion and them never using it. good poem! ! ! 10

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 May 2009

'My advice I will only Share if you care enough to ask for it, or if you dare' yeah..only share it only if he s ready to listen...well expressed...

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i agree with you.. talk once, and twice.. then walk away... sometimes.

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your concern gets hurt is'nt it...a very practical write..everybody could relate to

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 May 2009

A tough decision m ade easy with words..........

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